My Review for Deeds by Esther E Schmidt

Deeds: Broken Deeds MC
Blurb: Deeds has just spent the last few weeks jonesing after a woman he only knows as Hotlips. Apparently pissing off a female can be rather entertaining from the safety of a text and their witty banter has left the President of Broken Deeds MC wishing for more.

The annoying, yet funny, communication comes to an end when they meet face to face. Lynn is the sister of Zack, current president of Areion Fury MC. Brought up the daughter of an MC President, Lynn is hell bent on not being a biker’s bitch.

When an enemy of Broken Deeds MC comes to play, Deeds is willing to give his last breath protecting what he claims is his. Deeds, a former MMA fighter, will need to revive his old fighter skills to protect his woman. Will it be enough to bring their enemy down or will he not only lose his only love but also his life?

May be spoilers:

This is the 1st in the Broken Deeds MC series. It has 18 chapters and is about Deeds and Lynn/Hotlips.

Warning: There is constant cursing and lots of hot, rough sex, with a little spanking and choking so if you don’t like to read that, this story isn’t for you. There is talk of rape of children, it’s not descriptive, but I do like to mention it.

We start off the story with them meeting at the gym and I definitely think it’s instalove, but they meet and realize they’ve been texting back and forth for quite awhile. He’s only had a picture of her lips and she didn’t know who he was. Blue, she is hilarious and has no filter whatsoever.

Deeds tells Zack that she’s his and has been since the first phone call, which I thought was awesome. Zack is her brother and president of the Aerion Fury MC.He takes and claims her right away. It starts off fast and doesn’t stop. Really smoking hot sex.

An enemy of Deeds attacks her right off the bat and he is pissed and so is her brother. Zack and Lynn go off when Deeds calls her his ol’ lady which I thought was funny and so did Blue. He’s got 3 weeks to get her to accept his property tattoo, which is hilarious.

She does push away for a little bit at first. But she’s hot for him. She’s just freaked out. Doesn’t last long.

Love, love, love Grams! They took to each other quickly.

Lynn looks over a file of 4 missing boys, but Deeds won’t tell her much. She’s definitely not happy. But him and his club are trying to find them and get evidence against the guys who are responsible. Doesn’t last long.

I love how accepting everyone is with her even with them testing her loyalty cause she hasn’t been inked yet. She gets a little pissed when she finds out who Deeds and his boys really are, thinking that he doesn’t trust her so he hasn’t told her himself.

Lips finds a connection between the boys, but she wants to check it out so she sneaks out and has Dams from Aerion Fury MC come get her and take her. Deeds is pissed she was gone cause he was worried about her and she was on the back of another man’s bike and that is a no, no in his world. They save the boys and one of their own is killed.

This was such a great story. Action packed from the beginning. I loved this one. They were great together. No separations, even though she fought herself in the beginning. Lots of hot sex. No epilogue as it continues in to the next. Love, love, loved it. Gave it 5 stars because I loved it. Thanks for reading.

Shelves: choking, faithful-since-meeting, fast-read, favorite, favorite-author, get-together-stay-together, great-read, hfn, instalove-lust, love-how-he-loves-her, no-cheating-between-mcs, no-epilogue, no-ow-om-drama, no-sex-scenes-with-ow-om, no-virgins, o-t-t-alpha, push-pull, read, reread, rough-sex, safe-for-me, spanking, steamy, talk-of-rape

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